Reaction has been mixed, much as it was amongst the members of my writers' circle and the editors from Every Day Fiction. There was even a one-star rating from someone who took exception to the profanity. Anyhow, the link is below:
All I can say about the story is that there's a pinata scene around the middle of the story, and that any other information would be a spoiler.
As the site suggests, Every Day Fiction publishes a piece of fiction daily. The story can be almost any genre and encourages lively debates and critiques amongst those commenting.
Why not take a look at the site?
Below are links to my Global Short Story Competition winning story, my short-listed story for the National newspaper (Abu Dhabi's, annual short story competition) and a story that appeared on the Every Day Fiction site - where you can leave a comment: