The story concerns a rough-and-ready guy with a beautiful, brainy girlfriend who works on neurological experiments involving the human brain.
As you might expect, in common with many of my stories, all is not quite as it seems.
And I'm afraid that's it - otherwise I'll spoil it for anyone who's going to read the story.
Below are links to my Global Short Story Competition winning story, my short-listed story for the National newspaper (Abu Dhabi's, annual short story competition) and a story that appeared on the Every Day Fiction site - where you can leave a comment:
http://www.inscribemedia.co.uk/assets/october-ebook.pdf
http://www.thenational.ae/arts-culture/short-story-a-day-for-decisiveness
http://www.everydayfiction.com/the-d-day-diorama-by-paul-a-freeman/#comments
Happy Writing!